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"Ryl, watch it!"
I was quickly and roughly tackled to the ground with a resounding thud. Almost immediately afterwards, a gout of flame burst from the rough-hewn stone wall that I'd previously been standing next to.
"Geez, you really don't notice anything, do you?", Eltir said, disappointed, as he quickly hopped to his feet. "You strolled right onto that pressure plate without even picking up on it. In fact, this whole corridor's been rigged with 'em! How you missed the rest of them is anyone's guess."
I laughed sheepishly. "Eheh, sorry!" I replied, pulling myself off the ground. "You know I'm not the observant sort... But th
Click
"Ryl, watch it!"
I was quickly and roughly tackled to the ground with a resounding thud. Almost immediately afterwards, a gout of flame burst from the rough-hewn stone wall that I'd previously been standing next to.
"Geez, you really don't notice anything, do you?", Eltir said, disappointed, as he quickly hopped to his feet. "You strolled right onto that pressure plate without even picking up on it. In fact, this whole corridor's been rigged with 'em! How you missed the rest of them is anyone's guess."
I laughed sheepishly. "Eheh, sorry!" I replied, pulling myself off the ground. "You know I'm not the observant sort... But th
Just writing a bit here and there. Amateur writer. Probably not the best at it, but I'm tossing stuff here for my friends to read on their offtime. If you think you can help me improve, constructive criticism is appreciated.